Monday, September 19, 2016


 Outline
 What is this car name: This name is Terrafugia TF-X.
 What does it look like: Car driving on the road and flying in the sky. 
 What kind of fuel does it use: It use an electric motor to fly and electrification to powered car.
  How many kilometers per hour: It can flight 300 kilometers per hour and can drive 800 kilometers per hour.
  How much does it cost: This car 9 million price baht.
  What is the In-text citation's name and year of this writing: Vanda,2015.

First Draft
  In the future.I would like to car driving o the road flying in the sky.The name of this car is Terrafugia TF-X. This car is spacial in that it has wings that can flight . It can be powered by electric motor and flight by electrification. Terrafugia the company who manufacture the combine airplance-car, is revealing that Terrafugia TF-X will be published in next 8 years. It can flight three hundred kilometers per hour and can drive eight hundred kilometers per hour. This car will be at price of 9 million baht. I think the journey would be easier if there was Terrafugia TF-X.
Reference
 Vanda.(2015), Terrafugia TF-X:Retrieved from http://www.ที่สุดในโลก.com/นี่คือ-the-terrafugia-tf-x™-รถยนต์บินได้-โคตรล้ำพร้อมบินเร็วๆ-นี้.html

2 comments:

  1. 1.ชอบไอเดียของเพื่อน
    2.ประโยคไม่ค่อยสมบูรณ์
    3.Toppic ไม่ชัดเจน

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  2. ยังไม่มี in-text citation เข้าไปดูได้ที่ Writingsut
    -รูปแบบ In-text citation = (นามสกุล, ปี)
    -เนื้อหาครบถ้วนดีครับ ปรับรูปแบบประโยคอีกนิดนึ่ง บางประโยคยังไม่ค่อยสมบูรณ์เช่น This car will be at price of 9 million baht.

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