-What is his name?His name is Lee Yong Dae.
-What dous he look like? He is handsome and he is tall.
-What kind of sports does he play? He plays badminton is very well.
-What has been he sport success? He has competed Olympic and he won his gold medal.
-Why do you like him? I like him because he plays badminton very well and he is handsome.
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Lee Tong Dae is a badminton successful at a young age. He is my favorite athlete. He very is handsome and tall. He is not samart but he also wise to play badminton.Lee Yong Dae won numerous competitions and he won the gold medal in the Olympic.He is the favorite a lot of people and he is one of the world badminton ace.I like him because he plays badminton very well and I'm going to be a good sport man like him
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